中考英语一轮复习书面表达训练知识点及练习题及解析

　中考英语一轮复习书面表达训练知识点及练习题及解析

　 一、中考英语书面表达训练 1．2019 年 2 月 20 日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

　某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

　提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important

　提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life?

　● Why do you do so?

　 As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

　 【答案】例文

　As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

　例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

　高分亮点：

　短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

　句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

　 2．写作

　某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:

　1. Who was the person you made happy?

　2. When was it?

　3. What did you say or do?

　4. Why did it make him/her happy?

　5. How did you feel at that moment?

　注意：1．词数：100 左右（题目不计入总词数）。

　2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。

　【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn"t adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.

　In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.

　【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂 5 个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。

　写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。

　 3．

　“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

　 要求：

　1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

　2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；

　3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

　4. 词数 80 左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

　Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.

　As junior high students,

　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.

　【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.

　As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.

　Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称 we 来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。

　【点睛】

　这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如 We should be polite to others and

　try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

　 4． 书面表达

　共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给《21 世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

　社会现状

　自从出现，饱受赞誉。

　诸多优势

　1.随处可见，出行方便

　2.有益健康，减少污染

　3.费用不高，负担得起

　存在问题

　1.未及时归还

　2.占道挡路

　 你的观点

　我认为……（考生自拟，至少 2 点）

　 注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

　2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用 2―3 句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。

　3.词数在 90 个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

　Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

　 【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.

　Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it"s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What"s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.

　But there are some problems too. Some people can"t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.

　I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it"s a way of living a green life.

　【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《21 世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题

　以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。

　点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如 They can be seen everywhere so that it"s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What"s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如 Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all 等等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。

　 5．书面表达

　假设你将代表你校 2009 届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言

　稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：

　回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同

　学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。

　注意：1. 90 词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

　Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.

　Thank you for listening!

　【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.

　It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers" efforts, our parents" support and our classmates" help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.

　I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!

　Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.

　Thank you for listening!

　【解析】

　这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写

　作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。

　 6．书面表达

　以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约 100 词的短文。

　要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。

　2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

　【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,

　“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.

　Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.

　【解析】

　这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

　点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如 found, kept, got, were, spoke 等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如 They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如 So they decided to do something for the young tree 这句话中使用了句型 decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语 after that, speak highly of 等等。

　 7．题目②

　“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。

　某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。

　提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud

　提示问题：1. What did you do?

　2. How do you feel?

　It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.

　 【答案】It"s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.

　When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I"m very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I"m ready for any challenges in the future.

　【解析】

　【分析】

　本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

　【详解】

　1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写 How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。

　2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

　3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型 It"s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be

　proud of；不定式 in order to；try my best to；状语从句 so…that …；比较级 do much better in …、feel more confident 等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。

　”

　 8．环境保护人人有责， 如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球 保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

　某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

　提示词语：

　pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action

　提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our

　daily life? ● What’s your wish?

　Now there are many environmental problems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　【答案】例文

　Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.

　I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.

　I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

　例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

　高分亮点：

　短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

　句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

　【点睛】

　首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如 save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

　 9．近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。你的美国朋友

　Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

　要点提示 :

　1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;

　2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;

　3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;

　4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

　注意 :

　1.词数 80-100;

　2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

　3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

　4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

　 Dear Sam ,

　I"m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.

　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.

　Yours

　Daming

　【答案】Dear Sam,

　I"m happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions.

　First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it"s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don"t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you"d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.

　In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.

　Yours,

　Daming

　【解析】

　【详解】

　这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给 Sam 写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了建议。通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和 Sam 先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一

　个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。

　【点睛】

　这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给 Sam 写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与 Sam 之间的问候以及引出 Sam 学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly 等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准确，用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如 First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it"s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

　 10．4 月 23 日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

　提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important

　提示问题：● What kind of books should we read?

　● Why do we read?

　Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

　 So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

　Li Hua

　 【答案】例文

　Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.

　So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

　Li Hua

　【解析】

　【详解】

　题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

　例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

　高分亮点：

　短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

　句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

　 11．书面表达

　假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

　 要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；

　2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；

　3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。

　 The Changes in Class

　Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class.___________________________________________________________________________

　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　【答案】

　 The Changes in Class

　Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.

　I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

　 结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

　【点睛】

　本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

　 12．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计

　划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

　写作内容：

　1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

　2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

　3.读自己喜欢的书。

　4.远离危险的地方。

　写作要求：

　1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

　2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

　3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

　My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

　【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

　Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents.

　I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and

　help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself.

　I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to

　take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.

　I"m sure I"ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.

　【解析】

　试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

　写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end 结束；on the way 在途中；get close to nature 亲近大自然；volunteer to do something 自愿做某事；help sb to do sth 帮助某人做某事；take part in sth 参加活动。用了一些衔接词 besides 等，句子过度自然。用了because 引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

　考点：考查提纲作文。

　 13．

　朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

　1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;

　2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；

　3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的

　要求：

　1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密

　2. 词数 80-100

　3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名

　Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.

　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　【答案】My best friend

　Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs

　friends to talk with and get confidence from.

　My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.

　I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.

　I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。

　【点睛】

　人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly）

　hair / （big/small）

　eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用 be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用 like sth./doing sth.best 或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。

　 14．书面表达

　初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。

　活动

　毕业晚会

　时间

　6 月 28 日晚上七点

　地点

　学校礼堂 school hall

　参与者

　全体初三学生和老师

　活动内容

　1.

　邀请校长作演讲；

　2.

　互赠礼物送祝福；

　3.

　各班表演精彩节目

　4.

　要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯;

　2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。

　 3.80 词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数;

　4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

　Dear editor,

　I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.

　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　Best wishes,

　Yours Lihua

　【答案】Dear editor,

　I"m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.

　This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.

　Best wishes,

　Yours,

　Li hua

　【解析】

　【分析】

　这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

　【详解】

　这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

　 15．现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于 80 词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

　提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？

　2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？

　3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？

　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　【答案】例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and

　convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.

　So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　这是一篇给...